As you probably know, Return of the Giant Superhero is definitely not a once in a lifetime experience, and viewing it in your theater did nothing to improve how mediocre this movie is. First of all, I was disappointed to see that you screened the film in the smallest of your six theaters. Although only 16 of the 50 seats in the theater were filled, this is a movie intended for a large auditorium and the largest screen possible. I’m sure I would have enjoyed the film much more if I had watched it in a larger room.

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