Fauntleroy wanted to be as ferocious dragon like his father? He had learned from an early age that dragons were meant to destroy things!

"If you see a village, burn it down with your fiery breath; son:" Fauntleroy's father always told him

One day while he was playing in the forest. A little girl came along.

"What a cute little dragon? " she said. "Do you want to be my friend."

"Sure. " said Fauntleroy immediately forgetting everything his father told him about befriending people!

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