Your friend asked for help revising her essay for English class. You notice that many of her sentences are short with a similar structure. Read part of her essay below, then write her a note explaining why she should revise her essay to use a variety of sentence structures. Include an example of a revised sentence she could use in her essay.

“Hamlet is a play written by William Shakespeare. It was written in 1599. It is very famous. The play is about the character Hamlet. Hamlet is the prince of Denmark. Hamlet is upset because his father has died. Hamlet finds out that his uncle killed his father. Hamlet learns about his father’s murder from a ghost.”